In progress… (by Keri)
March 6, 2008 by superstaractress011
Okay, so I was wondering if I should continue this story that I started. Give me some feedback, okay!
I sat on my window seat, staring at the stormy sky above. Rain pounded on the roof, thunder was crashing and lightning was constantly flashing across the sky. Suddenly, my gaze was drawn down to the lawn. I gasped. A tall, hooded figure in a black cloak was standing the middle of the yard. As though sensing my eyes on him, the figure looked up, right at me. Suddenly, a bolt of lightning flashed, and for several seconds, the figure was illuminated. The figure had no head. Just a bloody stump. It had no hands either, just stumps, that appeared to be dripping. The figure raised it’s arms straight up, towards my window. It appeared to be looking right at me. I screamed. Then,, when I looked down, the figure was gone.
this story, so far, leaves me curious:
where are you?
who are you?
how old are you?
how can the figure be hooded when it has no head?
how can you see that it has no hands when it’s wearing a black cloak?
is this a dream?
….interesting…and scary….I hope it ends well